Sound and Fury Signifying Nothing

Well, the new year is here and a lot happened… yet so little.  First of all before Christmas I was able to knock out a few chapters.  I was hoping to keep some momentum going since it is difficult to get going again once you pause.  A certain paralysis.  Fate intervened and I was able to spend an inordinate amount of time with my family during Christmas.  While lovely by itself it did mean that I wasn’t able to actually do anything that required concentration.  So I haven’t been able to put pen to paper much since a bit before the holidays.  I can’t say exactly when this will change.

This isn’t to say I haven’t been productive.  There have been a ton of miscellaneous activities I have been able to fit in between family.  My website underwent a complete makeover, adding content, aesthetics and mobile-friendly content.  I love my menu with the popup icons but it looked terrible on a mobile device.  The book samples look much better… though whether these are mobile-friendly is up in the air, and I added a lot of images to the pages to make them more interesting.  Much like the image here I am trying out.  So the webpage blog gained a newsticker and news item summary a separate page for the website blog (in addition to the side module elsewhere).

I also added a forum and a messaging system because… well I always wanted one.  I don’t expect anyone to use it but it was fun to set up.  I also have a friend who started a D&D campaign and I have devoted a page to that.  Although Fantasy Grounds (basically an online platform to play with the GM and players) is pretty nice its drawback is that when the DM is offline so are all the campaign notes.  This makes it difficult to plan things in between games.  So we have some resources, history, notes and a calendar.  So far only one other player has even looked their but again, it was fun to set up and I learned more about Joomla.  One other player makes a log of all the events that happened each game session and he gave me permission to upload it under his name as a game blog.  Again I don’t think he’s seen his own work yet.  Ironic.

Fantasy Grounds… the online RPG platform you love to hate.  A bit buggy at times but better than the alternatives.  If you have been reading this blog and my website blog you may have realized that my favorite RPG game is Rifts, not D&D.  However, Palladium is pretty conservative when backing 3rd parties so there hasn’t been a way to play it online.  Over the holidays I spent some time working with an Extension for a FG ruleset that should allow people to use FG to play Rifts online.  It takes a bit more elbow grease than D&D since Palladium hasn’t licensed the content but if the GM is willing to put in the work it should be pretty darn compatible.  I even did an online tutorial on how to use the FG Extension and put the Youtube video on my website.

There is also a program that allows you to update the Theme (GMW Campaign Toolkit, it basically modifies the artwork in FG) that I played around with.  I re-used some of that work in the website upgrade.  I wanted to do another tutorial to explain a few grey areas on the use of the software but I have literally not been alone in the house since the first video tutorial.  It’s hard to get the quiet needed to do that kind of work and frankly its been so long now that the specifics I had wanted to talk about are not as sharp in my memory.  Oh well, it was a nice dream.

And finally, getting back to the book and all that boring writing stuff… when I first published the third book I submitted to many reviewers.  More than fifty I think, though I didn’t keep exact track.  Most of them rejected it due to lack of time, interest or it being the third book in a series.  However, two Reviewers actually came through.  One back in October “Mrs Y” and “Amy Shannon” just recently.  Neither one is really a stellar rating but they are actually the only ones I have gotten in five years of asking… so yay!  Also, neither one had read the previous books.  I doubt I could tolerate reading a book starting in the middle of the series so it worked out as best as I could expect.


Forked Process

A visitor to my blog had an interesting idea.  There is a website called Royal Road.  People go there to publish their stories in a chapter by chapter method.  They get feedback and in some cases financial support (through Patreon and Paypal).  He suggested I publish my “Chained Worlds Chronicles” there.  Until he brought it up I hadn’t even heard of the website so I didn’t know what to think.  I am still not completely convinced it is a good idea but I thought I’d give it a try with the other book I am writing.  See how it feels.  So I am now slowly proofing and publishing “A Virtual Invasion” to Royal Roads and Webnovel.

Personally, I am a little skeptical.  Both of these sites don’t make it practical to promote yourself or let people know you have other series or even where else you exist on the web.  Also, there are truly a ridiculous number of books/chapters being published every minute that new novels are pushed down the list so fast it’s a wonder people are aware they exist.  Nevertheless, I thought I’d give it a try and see what it’s like to do something besides Amazon.  Those of you who have read my blog in the past know I tried Barnes and Nobles and Apple with truly pathetic results, but time marches on and I suppose I need to keep up with the alternatives out there, even if I later decide it’s not for me.  Anyway, look for it here:

I Blinked Again

When I first published my book (#1) in 2014 Indie reviews weren’t really a thing.  They may have existed but either I didn’t find them or I simply don’t remember them.  With my second book, I definitely knew they existed but I think I only found about 5 people/sites to request reviews from.  There were others but they were all pay sites.  None of them decided to review my work so I had to depend solely on my readers.

Then I blinked.  Two years later and I am looking for reviewers again and OMG there’s a ton!  I have just been going through one list (The Indie Review list) and there are 297 entries!  Some of them don’t count for me since they only do romance or historical or non-fiction but that still leaves a ton.

The community changed a bit.  They have a lot of pull.  Each site has a review policy and checklist (as required by the Indie Review List).  Some have automated contact sheets and are pretty mechanical others want the personal touch.  There was one site that wasn’t taking reviews but they pointed out that a lot of writers are pretty rude when requesting a review, sending out impersonal request letters that didn’t even have their name.  They had a good point.  Until I went to that site and read that I did the same thing.  She suggested at least addressing the reviewer by name.  A simple but very personal touch.

Now keep in mind that a lot of review sites are run but groups that don’t release their names or enter a queue so you don’t actually know who will read your request.  Others use a contact form that is straight to the point and no frills.  Still, if you are sending a request to a single person this can really change the tone of the e-mail.

Another reviewer had a neat angle.  He required you send the contents of page 69 of your book.  Apparently, there’s a theory that this can decide whether to buy the book or give it a pass.  Fortunately, my MC was doing something interesting on that page instead of brushing his teeth or taking a nap.  Or researching.  He does that a lot, which important for character progress but I suppose would be a somewhat lacking excerpt.  Wow, I really dodged that bullet.

Another thing that is new is author interviews.  I have no idea what they are but they sound interesting.  Well, kinda.  I have a hard time imaging people want to hear how I deal with two crazy twins every day but I suppose I could talk about my creative style… or something.  Maybe my shopping habit.  I did do some question and answers over on Goodreads.  Maybe someone read that.

One problem I am doubtless going to run into is that this is book #3.  I know that if I was a reviewer I wouldn’t want to review a book in the middle of a series on its own merits.  Heck, I am not sure I want them to.  after I had submitted about 20 requests I realized this and I offered to send them the earlier books.  Of course, considering that most of them barely have time to read the book you request I have my doubts they will want to read 2 others first.  Still, with over a hundred relevant reviewers, I have hope that some of them will want to jump in.

Ready, Set… Go!

I have just submitted the third book to the Amazon store!  So its almost out.  Of course, Amazon has to review the submitted content for horrible errors but they usually do that within a day or so.  They say it could be up to 72 hours but I think that’s just to allow them some leeway.

Reviewing your own work for errors is always entertaining.  Not.  I used Grammarly for the initial review.  Either this add-on has degraded or my memory isn’t as good as it used to be  (a given).  My second pass review, where I read the entire story from scratch, caught a ton of glaring mistakes that I could have sworn Grammarly used to fix.  Perhaps in an attempt to get you to buy the complete version they moved the useful part of the program into the pay only section.  As much as I try to review the story, I always have heaps of incredibly useful feedback from readers that catch errors.  Thank you for that! The books wouldn’t be nearly as readable without your help.

Every time I upload a new book to Amazon, their system has changed slightly.  This time I found they have a program where they offer your paperback book to be picked up to alternate distributors.  I am not sure who this is… bookstores?  Coffee shops?  Car parts depots?  Probably not the last one.  The program is promising until you realize that you get 40% royalties instead of 60%.  This plus the base price increase means that you have to increase the book price.  Who is going to buy a $20 paperback?  Despite this, I signed up for it.  After all, no one buys my paperbacks anyway;)  Does that count as a Hail Mary pass?

On another front, I joined Amazon Associates.  It allows you to place targeted ads on your website that point to specific products.  If people click on that link and buy stuff on Amazon then you get something back.  I forget how much but a percent or so.  I signed up because I have a new (well not so new anymore) website that I wanted to display my books on.  I was trying to find an add-on that would display the reviews from Amazon for each book.  Needless to say, I failed.

There do seem to be such add-ons in existence but each seems to require you apply for Amazon’s API program.  Not user-friendly and the requirements for Amazon accepting you into the program are…unclear.  The Amazon Associates program allows you to go to Amazon and have them make a targeted advertisement for up to 4 items.  This includes a tiny cover graphic, the cost, and the star review rating total.  Not exactly what I wanted but it was something.

Anyway, I got kicked out of the program.  Apparently, if you don’t get a minimum number of sales from this advertisement within 180 days you get kicked out.  In other words, you aren’t allowed to advertise for them…  That’s odd logic but it does tell me that no one looks at my webpage;)

New Home Sweet Home

Just moved into a new house about two weeks ago.  What a huge endeavor.  Every time I move I get determined to throw things out.  Nothing was done during this time.  A few weeks before that I got a new NAS and installed Joomla on it.  Joomla is a free Content Management System.  Basically a newfangled webpage.  It was fun learning how to create a web page ( ) though I still have issues with it saying it’s not secure.  I am not sure if its a firewall issue or a VPN issue.  I’ll figure it out eventually.  All in all a remarkably unproductive month.  I am trying to get back into a routine.  I still have those three projects to get out!

Perils and Plans

I have had a few questions from readers about how far along I am with book 3.  I am about 3/5 done (unless it runs longer than expected).  I am looking at a release around December.  If I can find that Amazon program where I submit it through them I may use that.  This would delay the release a few months since you promise Amazon not to publish it separately while they look over your submission.  However, I may never be able to find that offer again.  Never let it be said that Amazon’s publishing program is clear and well documented.  I will deny it!

On a somewhat related note, I am also working in parallel on two other books.  One is a children’s book.  I wanted to have it ready for my little girls’ 5th birthday, but it is going to be late (already is).  I am doing the drawings myself.  I used to draw when I was much younger.  My talent pales in comparison to a professional artist, however, I think it should be adequate for children’s illustrations.  I also narrated it and recorded it for my kids.  They enjoyed it.  I may use this to test out the waters for audio books.  It’s only a ten-minute story and I can do it myself, so it should be good to get my toes wet.  It is a fun side project and I suppose I would be done already if I were working on it for more than an hour a day.

The second project is sorta a lit RPG genre story.  This is a crossover genre, generally describing full immersion VR MMO games.  I find them frustrating since playing a computer game generally has no lasting real-life impact.  I am trying for more of a reality crossover.

I know it looks like I am splitting my time three ways… and I am.  However, I also find myself working on them all on regular basis.  So, all in all, I have actually increased my writing speed for Book #3.

Flash Forward

Wow, been over a year already.  Last year wasn’t great for my progress.  My mother passed away and I got distracted by other projects as well as having to move.  Still, I am getting back on track.  I am hoping to have the next book done by the end of the year.  Amazon has a program where if you haven’t published something you can submit it to them.  I am not sure of the details but I may try that.  If I do I’ll let everyone know.

Thanks for all the people asking for statuses.  I appreciate your interests and will try to do a bit better with updates.


I submitted my book for review to “Underground Reviews”.  I have received the following:

“Congratulations on having A Prison of Worlds (The Chained Worlds Chronicles Book 1) selected as a Pitch Perfect Pick Finalist!

Our judges analyzed your book’s pitch, sample content, and several other factors and found it’s initial presentation comparable to other quality books in its genre and market. Once qualified, it had to finish in the top five of all our weekly qualifiers. This is an honor not given lightly.

Your book will be promoted as a finalist on our Facebook page by Monday. The following Sunday, we will add up your Likes and shares on Facebook, as well as the votes on our website. The winner will be published to our Magazine the following week, and the synopsis will go out to our 2000+ subscribers and 2000+ social media followers. The winner will also join the ranks of a select few books that are eligible for entry into our 2017 Novel of the Year competition.”

I am not sure how their system works but I think they gave me an award for not having formatting that sucks.  A review may or may not happen later.  That’s encouraging, right?



Webpage updates

I recently made a few changes to the web-site.  I added a Bloopers page to the allow the reporting of errors from the books.  I really hate errors.  If I could put a bounty on them I would.  I know my readers aren’t too fond of them either.  Anyway, I don’t think posts or changes to other parts of the site get reported like an update to the Blog page, so I am not sure anyone noticed.

Second, I have added a minor animation to the top of the “Projects” page.  It was intended to be a tiny icon sized animation, however WordPress construction tools seem to lack the concept of manual sizing.  So it’s a bit grainy and cut off when its resized to be the entire top of the page.  It still was a cool little thing to put at the top of the page.  If I get feedback such as “It crashes my machine!” or “I spent five hours downloading that page!” I will remove it.

Matters of the Heart

A reviewer noted that I had messed up on a ‘Find and Replace’ while fixing the name Matt.  Now all such ‘matters’ simply don’t ‘mater’.  That’s a horrible ryhm but it was mildly amusing when it was pointed out.  Embarrassing too;)  I have since updated the story and all matters of importance are back in place.

On an unrelated note… I have been doing some research on advertising.  Two years ago when I published there wasn’t much guidance except to blog, Facebook and Twitter.  After I published my second book I did a bit more research.  It turns out that the most up to date directions focus on reviews.  Reviews submitted before the book is even published!  Amazingly enough, there are scads of review sites out there that only will review a book before it’s published.  I’ll have to remember this for book 3.

Amazon has an interesting program as well, where they accept unpublished manuscripts in some sort of contest and if you win they will sponsor your book and guarantee a minimum income over the five-year contract.  Again, something to remember for next time.

Since I seem to be a bit behind in the whole advertising and review curve, I have been submitting my story to several book review sites and blogs.  From what I have read only the free ones have any real weight, though most of the paid ones don’t actually guarantee a favorable rating.  It’s interesting, I’ll have to see if anyone will pick my book to review.  It’s all voluntary (unless you pay them) so I assume it depends a bit on luck.

There was an interesting tutorial that suggested that in order to have a hundred reviews upon the day you publish, you have to contact five (or maybe it was ten) times that many to solicit reviews.  It also had methods to contact reviewers on Amazon and request they review your book.  It seemed… exhausting.  However, if you follow his advice and get a hundred reviews on the day it’s published, you will probably deserve every one of them.  Another common suggestion is to request a review at the end of your book.  This seems fairly reasonable.  Do you think I should add this?